Grading sample essays

Samantha Weed's essay:
A: 5 B: 8 C: 5
The essay is well organized. At the beginning, it talks about the plot and the character she chose. Then, she states out many detailed analysis. And she wrote a lot about how she achieved it.
Julia Rafferty's essay:
A: 5 B: 9 C: 4
The part that surprised me is that in her analysis, she even analyzes the style of the Shakespeare's writing. And then she analyzed what each sentence means and how she achieves it.

From their essays, I found out that they have many detailed analysis. Like analyze what the style of the writing it is, the word which represents what emotions, etc. I think I can add more of detailed analysis in mine. In performance part, they first give a sentence, then analyze what does the sentence mean, and then stating out how they achieve that; for my essay, I could add some of that.